frackin toasters progress pt. 2/?

https://udrive.oit.umass.edu/jgchan/jt_006.swf

Any feedback on the timing/cuts/whatever is more than welcome (I know it looks rough. That's getting cleaned up later.)

or is this one better?

https://udrive.oit.umass.edu/jgchan/jt_005.swf

Also,